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  • A Story About Running

    A Story About Running

    “So, it’s a story about love?” “No. It’s a story about running.” “Oh. Tell it again. I must not have been listening.” “Way back when your mom and I used to share an apartment, I used to go running. I went nearly every day. And nearly every day, I would ask your mom to come…

    Dan Metzger

    September 23, 2015
    Fiction, Short Story
    absurdity, brother, creative writing, family, Fiction, fight, jogging, life, love, pace, run, running, sister
  • Washed Away with the Floodwater

    The old man adopted Kiddo in April at the suggestion of his eldest granddaughter. She told him a puppy would be good for him, what with a year of living alone under his belt. When she first offered the idea, just a short time after Julia went to the Lord and the walls of the…

    Dan Metzger

    September 6, 2015
    Fiction, Short Story
    death, despair, elderly, family, Fiction, flood, grandchildren, granddaughter, hope, Jack Russell Terrier, letters, life, love, memory, photo, photo album, river, romance, sleep, train, train track, walk
  • Seeing the Signs

    Seeing the Signs

    Observing signs in the modern age. In the city… There’s a man standing facing the flow of foot traffic when I get to the train station. I notice an easel stand with a sign clipped from fasteners on the top edge. The thick black words on the sign ask of the passersby, “Do you know…

    Dan Metzger

    September 5, 2015
    Fiction, Gallimaufry
    barn, bigot, city, country, creative writing, Fiction, freedom, homeless, Mennonite, message, observing, religion, repent, salvation, sign, signs, socialist, speech
  • The Driving Southbound Rain

    There was more rain than he had seen in one place. It was less like driving through rain and more like driving while a five-gallon bucket emptied over the windshield over and over. The wipers thudded in sloppy rhythm as he reached for the final inch of coffee waiting cold in the styrofoam cup. About…

    Dan Metzger

    September 4, 2015
    Fiction, Scene, Short Story
    creative writing, driving, Fiction, heat, love, motel, rain, sleep
  • A Mass Engraving

    A Mass Engraving

    Requests come in daily. They are from loved ones wanting a rubbing from the Wall. A rubbing of the engraving they have requested be mailed to them. Loved ones who are unable to make the trip to the capitol. Loved ones who will not see their own eyes staring back from the glassy black wall.…

    Dan Metzger

    September 3, 2015
    Fiction, Short Story
    America, creative writing, death, engraving, etched, family, Fiction, history, hope, loss, love, missing, mother, mourning, names, rubbing, son, Vietnam Memorial, Vietnam Veterans Memorial Fund, Vietnam Veterans Memorial Wall, Vietnam War, volunteers, war, Washington D. C.
  • Softly-Filtered Wool Sweaters

    Softly-Filtered Wool Sweaters

    The drives seemed to be endless, those he took with his father. An endless motor hum, and endless drone of rubber on the highway, an endless silence choking the air between driver and passenger. The silence was unbearable. Paul always wondered what was going through the older man’s mind as he sat silent behind the…

    Dan Metzger

    September 2, 2015
    Fiction, Gallimaufry
    1970s, college, family, father, generation, higher education, Love Story, romance, son
  • Lights on the Farmhouse Table

    Lights on the Farmhouse Table

    Retrospect would have had me listen a whole lot closer when Dale Parish first told me about the lights. You know what they say about hindsight. Dale lived his whole life on his family’s farm. Ever since grade school, he’d start first period having already been up at least four hours. The rest of us…

    Dan Metzger

    September 1, 2015
    Fiction, Short Story
    afraid, alien, cosmology, country, creative writing, farm, Fiction, glow, lights, paranormal, religion, science, science fiction, suspense, woods
  • Visiting Gram

    Visiting Gram

    “She’s doing much better today, dear,” the portly woman behind the desk tells me as I sign my name on the guest registry. This marks my eighth time here in four weeks. I have signed and dated this page eight times, each time wishing it would be the last. You might think I wouldn’t have…

    Dan Metzger

    August 31, 2015
    Fiction, Short Story
    creative writing, family, Fiction, grandmother, hope, ill, love, nursing home, reception, visitiation
  • Laughter Saves Lives

    Laughter Saves Lives

    Where is the worth in waiting? I have been locked in stasis, hungry for change (as I’ve come to define waiting), but cannot find all that much to value there. Be present. Instead of expelling your desire waiting for summer, embrace winter. Summer will come regardless. Don’t just give up on what you can accomplish…

    Dan Metzger

    August 30, 2015
    Essay, Rudimentary Philosophy
    desire, hope, inspire, life, optimism, philosophy, testimonial, time, waiting
  • Fruit Punch and Rotten Eggs

    Each year, word of Miss Karen’s pool parties circled like buzzards at bus stops. It flowed through the halls of the elementary school like an unseen current humming through electrical wires. Third graders told incoming second graders who were lucky enough to have been assigned Miss Karen’s class about the end-of-the-year bash in hushed tones…

    Dan Metzger

    August 29, 2015
    Fiction, Short Story
    elementary school, fun, happy, magazines, pool, pool party, punch, school, summer, swimming, teacher, teaching
  • Texting Harriet Greer

    Jordan Gregg moved in about a month before the end of the school year. Mom found the timing of The Gregg’s move the sort of odd that borders on downright scandalous, what with enrolling two kids at Glenville just weeks before summer break. I’d been at camp for half the summer and up at my…

    Dan Metzger

    August 28, 2015
    Fiction, Short Story
    adolescence, boy, bus, bus stop, class, creative writing, Fiction, game, girl, high school, phone, school, school bus, small town, smart phone, summer, teenager, texting
  • A Deeper Shade of Blue

    The only thing Lindsey wants is a big old stick of blue cotton candy. It’s all she talks about the whole car ride. It had to be blue. If any color had a biggest fan, that color was blue and that fan was my little sister. She keeps going off about how she doesn’t like…

    Dan Metzger

    August 27, 2015
    Fiction, Short Story
    blue, brother, candy, cotton candy, county fair, creative writing, fair, family, Fiction, happy, kids, Kodak moment, photos, picture, pictures, siblings, sister, summer
  • The Facebook Bump In

    So you’re on Facebook, right? At the very least, you have Facebook open somewhere in that pile of programs you’re forcing your computer to run. You sat down at your desk over an hour ago, calm and collected, your mind clear. Minutes later, you’ve involuntarily become Alice, skirts plumed out like an umbrella, floating in…

    Dan Metzger

    August 26, 2015
    Essay, Humor
    coffee, eBaum’s World, Facebook, funny, humor, internet, joke, productivity, satire, social media, YouTube
  • Running Home

    Emma was in Boston the last time she’d ventured out for a jog. It had rained that morning and the puddles lay like landmines along her sidewalk-to-pond-and-back circuit. The mud splashed up to her ankles and had caked thickly on the laces of her running shoes. Now, in the living room of her parents’ Pennsylvanian…

    Dan Metzger

    August 25, 2015
    Fiction, Short Story
    application, art, books, Boston, Christmas tree, Christmas tree farm, city, college, creative writing, Donna Haraway, exercise, family, farm, farmer, Fiction, home, homecoming, literary theory, literature, narrative, narratology, Pennsylvania, reliance, run, Runner’s World, running, running shoes, self-acceptance, self-discovery, self-reflection, small town, smartphone, teaching, technology, town, tradtiion
  • Invoking the Blank Page

    Invoking the Blank Page

    I am looking to you, Blank Page, for help. I awoke today with Worry. While I was able to slough off the morning blanket, Worry persisted its shroud about me. An invisible source secures a tight hold around the top of my head. It clamps the innards of my chest. The cinches have been there…

    Dan Metzger

    August 24, 2015
    Essay, Mental Health
    anxiety, bipolar, bipolar disorder, blank page, communication, composition, creative writing, depression, fear, hope, listen, love, mental health, mental illness, mercy, self-acceptance, self-discovery, self-reflection, therapy, woe, worry, write, writer’s block, writing
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