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  • Consonants and Vowels and Eggs

    Consonants and Vowels and Eggs

    This guy’s been here almost every day this month. He always ends up sitting in the same stool, but only after sitting down at table 14, looking up and down the bar, walking back toward the door to pick up a Globe and scan the headlines. Then he pulls out the crossword and studies the…

    Dan Metzger

    April 25, 2015
    Fiction, Scene
    Boston, characters, crossword, diner, eggs, job, observance, old man, omlete, restaurant, scene, tips, waitress, work
  • Sunlight on the Number 9

    Sunlight on the Number 9

    April brings out the sunglassed ladies who don their frames on an afternoon bus ride through South Boston. Yuppie chicks and their bug eyes and dark lenses hide vulnerable souls from interlocutors found on smart phone applications they meet over drinks. Polarized eyes aid the creation of plausible lies. Vanity is victorious. There in the front of…

    Dan Metzger

    April 23, 2015
    Fiction, Poetry
    age, Boston, bus, light, observer, passenger, poem, south boston, sun, sunglasses, teenager, vanity, youth
  • Attic

    Attic

    All day I have been hearing jazz faintly playing in my room. It does not seep through the wall nor does it rise from the chambers below. The riffs are generated within my mind. My ears glimpse phantom sound waves—unseen, invisible. Their nonexistence will startle me any longer. For I am a music box of…

    Dan Metzger

    April 23, 2015
    Essay, Rudimentary Philosophy
    art, attic, books, creative writing, days, Fiction, future, inspire, jazz, life, listen, memory, movement, music, past, progress, prufrock, read, routine, self-improvement, wallpaper, write, writing
  • Observing a Sneeze

    Leaving the country for the summer can be kind of a big deal for 15-year-old girls. While it is not always the case, a venture like this can be a game-changer, moreover, a life-changer; going to Rome for three weeks of the three months of freedom between academic years did more than alter her worldly…

    Dan Metzger

    April 1, 2015
    Fiction, Short Story
    adolescence, airport, creative writing, family, Fiction, reading, relationships, romance, Rome, serial fiction, travel, vaction, writing
  • Penned Out

    Penned Out

    Ideas, once inked in permanence, are now buried beneath an ever-growing, pixelated timeline. (Is it so much different than having them closed between bound pages and set up on rarely visited bookshelf, the stacks in the library surrounded by thin carpet tread upon no longer?) They are suffering silent agony in the bottom of a…

    Dan Metzger

    February 24, 2015
    Essay, Rudimentary Philosophy
    communication, computers, creative writing, digital, essay, Fiction, ink, internet, life, nature, rebellion, self-discovery, social media, transcendental, woods, words, write, writing
  • Street Parking Woes

    Angelica hadn’t worked there but three weeks before she realized something was amiss. On Friday, she walked to her car during her sacred lunch break to find the all too recognizable florescent orange of a parking ticket envelope glaring from under the passenger side wiper blade. It was the fourth time the parking authority had…

    Dan Metzger

    February 24, 2015
    Fiction, Short Story
    car, career, city, creative writing, Fiction, fine, job, parking, parking ticket, quitting, working
  • Radical Writing Mantra

    Radical Writing Mantra

    Plunge beyond the blue yonder. Sail high. Shoot visible tingles out of your fingernails. Explain an event. Order disorder.  Keep the details to a minimum. Do not provide a frozen description or a still life. Provide action. Zoom in while walking backward. Invent the compression shot on paper. Purger thyself.

    Dan Metzger

    February 24, 2015
    Essay, Rudimentary Philosophy
    Fiction, mantra, words, writing
  • Darkroom Lighting Adjustment

    Darkroom Lighting Adjustment

    He glimpsed in her the possibility of an unwavering light; the constant, overpowering source of life that allows nothing dark to stay without an interrogation proving its validity. She, for a moment, caught sight of a hidden trove of underexposed prints in the darkroom of his soul, and with her assuring smile, replaced the gloomy…

    Dan Metzger

    February 10, 2015
    Fiction, Gallimaufry
    beauty, darkness, exposure, fears, light, love, romance
  • Askers and Tellers

    Askers and Tellers

    A thought on verbal conversation. It is a noticeable aspect in conversation that when one party offers a piece of information the other party will either respond with an inquisition about said tidbit of personal data or reply with tangential information from their own experience. Reflection on exchanges where one type of response outweighs the…

    Dan Metzger

    January 30, 2015
    Essay, Rudimentary Philosophy
    ask, conversation, converse, dialogue, hear, listening, talk, talking, tell, thoughts
  • Here Has Been Us

    Here Has Been Us

    At the end of the driveway, out of reach from the parental sensor light, the car off save for its accessorized music maker, two adolescents conversed. “Maybe I wasn’t driving at all. Maybe the roads were actually operating as treadmills and they moved under us. We remained stationary. We didn’t really just drive there, the…

    Dan Metzger

    January 22, 2015
    Fiction, Gallimaufry
    adolescence, campfire, conversation, creative writing, debate, dreams, friends, friendship, God, ideas, inquiry, mystery, philosophies, philosophy, religion, teenager, thoughts, universe, wonder, youth
  • Snow Dances

    Snow Dances

    Dusty waves of snow lap the pavement in curved sheets, rounded like a preschool teacher’s sample shapes. A lesson in scissor dexterity. Wind propels the white mass against my shoes, breaking formation like a group of synchronized swimmers, dancing in spirals around my calculated steps and meeting again on the other side. Floating in fluid…

    Dan Metzger

    December 8, 2014
    Fiction, Gallimaufry
    creative writing, independence, relationships, snow
  • Mr. Most Likely to Succeed

    I started another restaurant job yesterday. The kid who trained me my first day introduced me as the guy who was voted most likely to succeed for his high school yearbook. He grinned and chortled like a tranquilized banshee immediately after divulging that information then proceeded to tell me how important it was to drink…

    Dan Metzger

    November 14, 2014
    Fiction, Scene
    character, characters, dialogue, Fiction, restaurant, server, serving, sucess, tables, training, waiter, waiting, waitress
  • Depressive Tempests

    Depressive Tempests

    “The madness of depression is, generally speaking, the antithesis of violence. It is a storm indeed, but a storm of murk.” – William Styron, Darkness Visible: A Memoir of Madness It is never so simple to say, “listen here, this is an exact depiction of mental illness,” as is it not simply the case in…

    Dan Metzger

    November 3, 2014
    Essay, Mental Health
    bipolar, bipolar disorder, coping, coping skills, creative writing, depression, emotions, essay, family, Fiction, friends, hate, literature, love, memories, memory, mental health, mental illness, psychology, psychosis, storm, suicide, symbolism, therapy, trouble, weather, William Styron
  • Sixth Floor Paradise

    Sixth Floor Paradise

    After ascending a slew of concrete stairs, you reach this door. Throw your shoulder into it or else you won’t get it open. Once you do, though, you step through this threshold that separates the desolation of the staircase column from a plateau of peacefulness. You could turn to the right and trot into the…

    Dan Metzger

    October 23, 2014
    Essay, Gallimaufry
    books, father, Fiction, heaven, library, peaceful, reading, son, writing
  • Fourth to Last Train Home

    The hour was not incredibly late, but both parties were quite weary from their respective days’ toil. It had been a long, dog day of midsummer. They each carried aches in their bodies, but the weariness stemmed from elsewhere. There was a mental exhaustion at play, a soft drone humming on the part of the…

    Dan Metzger

    October 17, 2014
    Fiction, Short Story
    Boston, college, commuting, creative writing, fourth of july, MBTA, romance
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