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  • Diving Sticks and Other Recollections of Public Pools

    I once cracked open a diving stick and emptied the sand from it for no good reason. I walk past the fence of the public pool and am hit with a burning sensation within the caverns of my nostrils from the day I first jumped into deep water without holding my nose. Instinct exhales the…

    Dan Metzger

    August 10, 2016
    Fiction, Gallimaufry
    blind, childhood, children, creative writing, diving, memory, old lady, pool, public pool, summer, swimming, swimming pool
  • Bad Business

    Bad Business

    Habit had me walking home along the trolley rails late at night when no one else was on the road. A girl with a bag hanging on her hip was coming down the hill next to my building. She saw me stepping off the rails and onto the sidewalk. She passed my door as I…

    Dan Metzger

    May 24, 2016
    Fiction, Short Story
    apartment, bed, book, creative writing, Fiction, hobo, locomotion, love, poem, poetry, reading, scene, sidewalk, sleep, street, streetcar, trains, trolley
  • Conviction

    Conviction

    I fell in love with a girl named Conviction. We are inseparable. When I walk, I walk with Conviction. When I speak, I speak with Conviction. Before her I was faithless, with her I believe.

    Dan Metzger

    March 10, 2016
    Poetry
    creative writing, love, poem, poetry, relationships, romance, writing
  • Yule

    Yule

    Fingers of a lady sitting on the evening train viciously storm the pages of sparkling new book simply entitled Christmas Poems. With a curious smile I peer down from where I stand and remind myself it is the 18th of June.

    Dan Metzger

    March 8, 2016
    Fiction, Gallimaufry
    christmas, commute, creative writing, June, poem, poetry, short, smile, train, two sentences
  • Route 8 East (Tralnor Hunting Pt. 1)

    “Dude,” Hector Christman pushed through clenched teeth, “that was a cop car.” “No it wasn’t,” the driver shot back, his voice cool, metallic. “That car is always parked there. Trust me. It may have been a cop car at one point, years ago. Now it’s an old taxi cab. Vehicular evolution is a follows: police…

    Dan Metzger

    February 25, 2016
    Fiction, Scene, serial fiction
    creative writing, desert, driving, Fiction, friends, science fiction, serial fiction
  • Eight Last Minutes of Light

    Eight Last Minutes of Light

    The hours behind the sun stretch out to the curve of the universe then turn an inverted trek unto the shadowed earth, the space heater long gone out. Time cannot be heard in outer space. Its needle tip flashes to prick the fringe of fabric the patchwork quilt a chair-bound scientist wove with threads on…

    Dan Metzger

    February 23, 2016
    Poetry
    eyes, life, love, outer space, poem, poetry, sight, space, sun, time, vision
  • Temperance of Permanence

    Temperance of Permanence

    She met him when neither of them could stand to be alone. They remedied this by getting together. Now they’re face to face and he’s trying to tell her how now he can’t seem to be with anyone. The tightrope walk between being available and being alone is an act he’s made his own. Acrobats…

    Dan Metzger

    February 13, 2016
    Fiction, Scene
    conversation, creative writing, Fiction, hope, life, loss, love, memory, past, relationships, romance, writing
  • Open Wide | Uber Ride

    Open Wide | Uber Ride

    This one time when I was young the casing of a popcorn kernel hugged a hind tooth in my mouth for the better part of a month. That tooth has a number. My dentist is in her early 30s and she has that early 30s pep about her that most girls that age have forfeited…

    Dan Metzger

    February 12, 2016
    Fiction, Gallimaufry
    creative writing, daydream, dentist, Fiction, Uber
  • Cinematic

    Cinematic

    It is a little-known fact that when you look at the back of a movie poster you see a mirror image of the picture on the front.  The same goes for how the images look when you stand behind the movie screen itself. Spend enough time in the seats of a cinema, and you will…

    Dan Metzger

    February 9, 2016
    Fiction
    creative writing, crying, dialogue, Fiction, film, imagination, introvert, life, memory, movies, music, writing
  • Middleton

    Middleton

    Middle age endows its members with, amongst strands of grey, bushels of gifts. Most are neglected, others embraced, but none must go unnoticed. Years accumulate, begging the excavation of long-buried relics—memories tucked under blankets of time. Unlike meticulously dusted deposits of Jurassic carbon, the artifacts of days past have a tendency to uproot hurriedly from…

    Dan Metzger

    January 5, 2016
    Fiction, Short Story
    beach, call, creative writing, Fiction, forgotten, heartbreak, hope, job, life, love, memory, phone, relationships, romance, salty, summer, work
  • Breadth of Breath

    Breathing comes naturally. You launch from your mother’s insides equipped with innate survival skills, preprogrammed to do something you will do until the last day you are alive. How peculiar (because the action is automatic) are those moments when you are aware of the ebb and flow of the air you are filtering? You can…

    Dan Metzger

    January 4, 2016
    Rudimentary Philosophy
    air, awareness, body, breath, breathe, breathing, creative writing, innateness, involuntary, lungs, oxygen, thinking, thoughts
  • Measurable Time

    Measurable Time

    INT – A MODEST DWELLING – LATE NIGHT The slim frame of ALEC passes a doorway where a man with grey in his beard sits facing the other direction. BARRY stirs in his chair and calls the figure he hears rustling in the other room to come speak with him. BARRY speaks, inaudibly, to the…

    Dan Metzger

    December 19, 2015
    Fiction, Rudimentary Philosophy, Scene
    creative writing, debate, family, father, Fiction, perception, scene, son, time
  • The Vacuum Dance

    The Vacuum Dance

    Maid and maiden in one, collecting dirt and dust brought down by time itself, is oft confined to her wayward thoughts. No matter the lonely durations when futile impresses nullify her persisting mind, gladness is pinned on her tired heart. Within dusting and polishing and scrubbing and scraping dried food pieces from dinnerware, one task…

    Dan Metzger

    November 19, 2015
    Gallimaufry
    cleaning, creative writing, dance, vacuuming
  • Purporting Romance Mythically

    Purporting Romance Mythically

    Romance is an exercise in myth building. When a new relationship is on the rise, budding rosebuds are gathered while the wilted are buried away. We pull together moments and save artifacts and write a history for our lives as newly paired duos. We destroy, to an extent, our former lives. We become revisionist historians,…

    Dan Metzger

    October 28, 2015
    Essay, Rudimentary Philosophy
    burn, desire, family, fire, future, hope, love, myth, past, relationships, romance, theatre
  • Inkwell Reflections for Miss Dickinson

    Inkwell Reflections for Miss Dickinson

    White dress white dress how softly compressed prismatic coordinates printed over a spectrum of threads matching sheets covering the little table and chairs in the upper room of consciousness. White—no color or all the colors at once? All the bright or all the dark the stark dark hair and the pale face pale arms pale…

    Dan Metzger

    October 15, 2015
    Essay, Mental Health, Rudimentary Philosophy
    Amherst, bipolar, bipolar disorder, creative writing, death, depression, Emily Dickinson, life, mental health, mental illness, page, paper, pen, poem, poetry, read, reading, steam of consciousness, truth, writing
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